Monday, October 31, 2005

A quiet cacophony

What you see may not be what i'm seeing,
what you interpret may not be what i m portraying.
Looks can be deceiving, so don't judge the book by its cover.

On the surface, everything may seem smooth and wonderful,
but on the inside, an internal rumble is taking place.
What is happening? A prelude for a deeper rumble?

I should be happy with what i have,
i should be grateful with what i m getting.
But some things just don't seem right... and i can't figure it out.
Do i need a shrink?

Maybe i just want out.
Out of this place.
Maybe.

8 Comments:

Anonymous Anonymous said...

i like the antithesis in the heading. sums up the discordance expressed in the piece quite neatly.

7:15 AM, October 31, 2005  
Anonymous Anonymous said...

hmmm...maybe more sleeves for shit wiping? ;)

10:53 AM, October 31, 2005  
Blogger BiGcHiN said...

thanks :) just happen to come up with this oxymoronic heading, as i was writing the piece

11:28 PM, November 01, 2005  
Blogger BiGcHiN said...

and chisin! tsk tsk, shit wiping and all... you better wear long sleeve and bring a sweater out :p

11:31 PM, November 01, 2005  
Blogger ana said...

Yo fave senior!! Still owe u ur birthday dinner, hor? Wait wait... hari raya hafta give out money lah... so sure will be broke soon one =p.

Newae take care and see u sooN!!

11:22 PM, November 02, 2005  
Blogger BiGcHiN said...

say so much! it's been like centuries la... okok, i demand power treat now!

12:55 PM, November 03, 2005  
Blogger ana said...

Aiyah... wat are centuries to an old man like u? =p Heheh... Patience, my fren =p.

11:42 AM, November 05, 2005  
Blogger BiGcHiN said...

an old man's are usually numbered. how to be patient? ;)

12:11 AM, November 06, 2005  

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